OT: Critics and Proofreaders needed...

[scirocco16vr32 at gmail.com (Chris Bennett)]

Last time and then I swear to Allah I will shut up.

I forgot to warn everyone that there is some violence and strong language.

It's a kindler, gentler Navy so I have some sort of faint, mild
compulsion to be politically correct.

;)
Chris

On 9/8/05, Chris Bennett <scirocco16vr32@gmail.com> wrote:
> Just a quick note...
>     To all that have devoted time and energy by reading/editing, I
> want to thank you and the feedback has been outstanding.  I have been
> raked over the coals twice really good but that is what I wanted.  LOL
> 
>      I like the story alot but I know the writing is semi-atrocious.
> Bear with me I am trying to process all the input and with the help I
> have recieved I may be able to salvage this.  LOL
> 
> Thanks again
> Chris
> 


-- 
The most important things are the hardest things to say. They are the
things you get ashamed of because words diminish your feelings - words
shrink things that seem limitless when they are in your head to no
more than living size when they are brought out.
That is the worst I think... when a secret stays locked inside not for
want of a teller, but that of an understanding ear.
Stephen King